I think the info given in this chapter was quite appropriate, given that this is the first chapter and set in an AU at that. So good call. :3 Though you might have to work on spacing and technical things like that to make the readers not feel intimidated by the long paragraphs. Personally, I felt that the intro to the story was quite well done. <3
That said, I'll surely be on the look out for the updates. <3
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Date: 2011-05-18 02:43 pm (UTC)That said, I'll surely be on the look out for the updates. <3